Julia Alvarez
Each morning I wrote my name
on the dusty cabinet, then crossed
the dining room table in script,
scrawled
in capitals on the backs of chairs,
practicing signatures like scales
while Mother followed, squirting
linseed from a burping can
into a crumpled-up flannel.
She erased my fingerprints
from the bookshelf and rocker,
polished mirrors on the desk
scribbled with my alphabets.
My name was swallowed in the towel
with which she jeweled the table tops.
The grain surfaced in the oak
and the pine grew luminous.
But I refused with every mark
to be like her, anonymous.
In the poem, a young girl tries to leave
imprints on the dusty objects in her house in which later are wiped away by her
mother. “Each morning I wrote my name on the dusty cabinet, then crossed the
dining table in script, scrawled in capitals on the back of chairs, practicing
signatures like scales” I believe that the author is trying to compare the
young girl’s aspirations to her mother’s. The girl wishes to leave her imprint
on the world. No matter how often her mother wiped away the smudged
fingerprints, they would always reappear. In the poem, the girl shows us how
she “refused with every mark, to be like her, anonymous”. This statement shows
us how the girl feels about her mother’s accomplishments. She believes that her
mother achieved as much as anyone else and her mother’s achievements are almost
unrecognized by her. She cannot stand the thought of ending up like this, so
day after day, she continues to leave her mark.
As children, have wild dreams. Some of us dream to accomplish and aim to beat our siblings in terms of results and more. Sometimes, we imagined ourselves being heroes or what people look up to. When I was young, I had goals to achieve. When I was young, when I won a trophy during sports day or when I got good results during examinations, I would be very excited to show it to my parents as I know that they will feel very proud of me.
Analysis by: Pok Zheng Ning (30) 2/3
Good observation of the contrast between the mother and daughter. It was interesting to read your personal reflection at the end of your analysis, but what is your conclusion on the message/ Subject-Matter of the poem?
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